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Five Years.
She waited by the phone.
Waited for a call that never came.
Sometimes courageous enough to dial the number.
But not strong enough to let it ring.

Five Years.
She spent wondering why
Wondering how it all happened so fast.
How in the span of a day,
Family turn into strangers.

Five Years.
She's been trying to forget about.
Forget his very existence.
Impossible a task it's proven to be
No matter her persistence.

Five Years.
He was gone. No sign of life.
Yet now he speaks of love and tears.
Please do tell me, Why now after
Five Years?
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Written by Laurelle.
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Morrigan94 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
good poem,love it
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arcanan18rannie Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student General Artist
Ouch... This poem hurts. Good work MissLaurelle :) you really captured the emotion of being left after 5 years
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MissLaurelle Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Professional Artist
thank you!
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grg123wntn Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i love the structure of this poem, and the manner in white u told the story. very impressed.
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MissLaurelle Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Professional Artist
:)
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SculptorOfDreams Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Student Writer
Wow! You never cease to amaze me with your writing talent. So excellently written! It leaves me with so many questions.

I may have to take poetry-writing lessons from you. :D Compared to what I've written and published here, its like comparing oranges to pomegranates.
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MissLaurelle Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Professional Artist
;P thanks but I don't believe in lessons.
I write from within and your style is you.
Mine aren't even really poems, more just thoughts put together.
Yours are story teller with a deeper meaning... I found.
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ThatDerp Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011
good as moite (:
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seraphsworld Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Wow, a model and a poet, lucky boyfriend you got there ;)
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MissLaurelle Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2011  Professional Artist
;)
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